Never again, never again
No one ever alone
Never again, no never again
Give the world another chance
One final dance
Add a little wine to the water
But don’t make it too much
Don’t leave her alone
Never again, no never again
Everything is for everyone
Everything always fades
Let there never be an end
Wine in the water
You are no longer mine
I am no longer yours
But there will come a time when we are together again
Don’t look back
Never again, never again
Don’t stay forever young
Never again, no never again
Learn from what you’ve seen
Away with sunglasses
Add a little wine to the water
But don’t make it too much
You are no longer mine
I am no longer yours
But there will come a time when we are together again
Don’t leave me alone
Never again, no never again
Nothing is for no one
Nothing always fades
Let there never be an end
Wine in the water
You are no longer mine
I am no longer yours
We will be together one day and I’ll be fine
As long as with this water, I can add some wine
Dare not comment me unless you dare to comment yourself
Comments
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wow... i really like this write. it makes so many memories come to mind and i love how bitter sweet the poem is. you put a new perspective on looking back to the past and rememebering some things you want to remember and some things you might not. the last stanza ties the poem together... reading through it i was a little confused until i came to the end and it seemed like it all made sense... and made me wanna have some wine! haha which do u prefer... red or white? AMAZING WRITE!
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The Blood of Jesus
Yeah I add wine to my water, and beer and whisky... maybe a little too much too often... memories make life a bit sweeter, the ones worth remembering anyway... i believe that is what you are trying to say, 'Water is just blah, we all know how it taste... variety is good... indulgence bad, add spice to life... and one's life is already spiced but maybe a little more of something to go with what we already have or HAVE had for that matter...
its an ok peice... i have seen better...
Doug
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Damn this was a mighty fine piece of work. Perhaps a song...I was not just reading this, I was imagining a beat...a rhythm..this was amazing hon, simply amazing.
xoxox
Carrie
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excellent poem i love the flow it has to it. alot of emotion as well. keep up the good work!!
~erica~
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