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Haunted Waters

Breathing in once more,
The cold intakes can't suffice
There's a loss of words,
A might to grab
Something for others to stab.

Grasp at nothing but air,
Try to surface the water
But keep on swimming in the darkness.
Not enough air to last
Nothing to grasp but memories

I cannot open my eyes
Just keep rubbing them
Make them red and sore,
Does that sound fimilar?

Watch the tears run down,
While all the words escape from me
Leaving my dry mouth.
I want to runaway and sleep
In a fimilar place,
Surrounded by haunted memories

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  • Tenchi 7786
    January 9, 2007

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    Amazing! Great job catching all your feelings. I think we all feel this way. I know I do. Keep it up

  • Smexi Sarge
    December 31, 2006
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    This is Awesome