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Cloud Matinee

cotton candy clouds
high in sky,drift slowly by
entertain the eye.

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Written May 27th, 2003

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  • N e a r
    May 27, 2003
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    short; sweet; powerful

    great job

    amanda-


  • Nam
    May 27, 2003
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    6.5/10

    I like cotton candy. I like the taste on my tongue and how it disolves quite quickly.

    A good piece here.


  • Lurie
    May 27, 2003
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    OHHH very sweet!!!!
    Bill your Senyru is wonderful!!!

    Shape shifter's float...
    turning, twisting my mind,
    Oh the wonder's of cloud's in the sky..........Laura