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Sunflowers

Sunflowers are golden in the fall
Bright and sunny

As the red tear drops fall on the petals
Covers the bright happiness

As you try to clean it more fall
Leaving stains

As the flower grows old and falls apart
Heart falls in broken pieces

Flower used up and dim
Heart washed up and dead

Nothing you could do
Both had to disappoint

They tried
But failed





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  • M.Antoinette
    January 16, 2007

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    Beautifully painful.

    Oh this is so sad and beautiful. I feel all the pain seeping through this write. Sunflowers can be so beautiful and then look so diffrent when they begin to wilt.