is that what i am
to everyone else
an abandoned angel
and nothing less
when i walk alone
is that what they see
the sad and hopeless little girl
hidden well inside of me
do they wounder
about me and if i was
abandoned? if anyone ever even bothered to care
about me or my family
come near me
try to touch me
i dare you because
i no you wont even attempt
A contest entry
- December New Members Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended January 8, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyme Time by Kevan.
390 points, ended March 3, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love it
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...touching
the pain sharply pierced me as I realize how it hurts to feel rejected and left out.
I like the form you used, but must admit that I wish the spelling was checked and the grammer exacted.
I sure hope things get better, and as for this, I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you and welcome to the site !
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U r a much wanted angel
Cool write.. Thank you for the entry. Hope you enjoy the site and hearty wishes for a prosperous new year
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
I would love nothing more than to come here and leave a glowing comment but I am afraid your entry cannot and will not be considered for a trophy winner as you did not meet the rules and criteria for this contest. It is very important that you read and follow the rules carefully. And while I am here, let me say, welcome to Allpoetry! I hope you find us to be a helpful and friendly place for posting your future works. I encourage you to take some time to wander the site and check out all that we have to offer here. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact any greeter here.
♥ Touchof1der
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welcome to allpoetry
A good write you have here though as the above comment states you have not followed the contest rules/criteria..
thank you for sharing
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Your entry for this contest needs to use one of the titles we gave you. Please edit your entry to comply with the rules of the contest.
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wow!
this was extremely powerful..if u ever wanna talk to sum1 about ANYTHING..i seriously emphasize the ANYTHING, come talk to me
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Very deep and poignant...awwww
The sadness and somewhat seemingly bitterness come through quite strongly! Wow
Thank you for sharing and welcome to AP
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