nobody knows it but me
i used to wake up
and know you were there
but now i know the truth
and now im just scared
you lied about your age
and so many other things
you were the only one
ive let in
in as long as i can remember
i dont know why im written this
i dont know what to say
except if your gonna break my heart
just stay away
i really thought you loved me
but i guess i was wrong again
ive never realy thought
but now i feel the pain
A contest entry
- I'm Bored by babygirltmple619.
360 points, ended February 14, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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awwwwwwwwwww, this is soooooo sad! it kinda makes me wanna cry. this is a nicely written poem and very creative but so incrediably sad. great write
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Beautiful
Awww...This is a beautiful Poem,Its powerful..Im sorry for what has happend to you,ANd I hope you are ok.
Hope your heart does not get broken,Its not a good feeling..
This is a really nice poem..
I cant say Ive felt this way,But I hope things get better..
I really love the first Line,"Nobody knows it but me" and how it relates to the last line "but now i feel te pain"
You have a way with rhyming..well done
Nash
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