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Your life given

I look at you
and it hurts.
something wonderful happened
and then something terrible.
so I'm torn between
these two things
what do I focus on?
I've made a 360 turn
and there's nowhere to run.
so I'm left stranded
until someone finds me
and carries me away.
Down in my heart
I want it to be you
and me
and no one else
not the rest of the world
just us.
Enveloped in the corners of the earth
secluded and seduced.
Let it be
hide me away from all else
let me forget my fears
breathe into me
the life I wish I had
the love I never would have
if it weren't for you.
Drown me in yourself
until your sea is dry
let me love you
until I die.
Sick and twisted fate
carrying me away
lost in shock
unbelieving
my mind is exploding.
forget the bad
dwell on the good.
Wrap me up in your body
let me stay there
until eternity sets in.
Let me live in you
forever.

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  • Mikil Zakevicute
    December 30, 2006
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    I kno

    Unbelievably raw and so full of emotion! You are beautiful... without sounding shallow, i want.....