I'll wear this pain like a badge
so you can see it,
but you'll never feel the pins that keep it up,
stuck deep in my heart,
it may seem silly
but the pain reminds me of the folly of love,
I wonder if it is worth it at times,
to keep the pain,
so I forget,
then you remind me of the pain,
the insecurity,
a burden that buries deeply into my happy thoughts,
so I wear this pain in caution
to avoid love,
to avoid more pain.
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I had fell in love and my heart was crushed when he didn't feel the same. I am fine now so I can talk about it without the pain. I still think about him but not the same. I love hugging him(he smells so good ^_^)!!!!
How do you feel about love?
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We all learn to love 'the hard way'...makes us appreciate the real thing when it finally arrives...keep on brave soul....
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It's a very good thing to find a 'guy' who smells good, they usually stink, but seriously, I get the point of your poem. I don't know why you think your poems aren't good, you just don't write much, or may be you do, but you don't post what you write lol.
I think your poem is great, and love does hurt A LOT!
And if you love again and get hurt, the pain is not less.. but i think you're a great person, and you should not let that good-perfumed guy get to u ever again. Mayb be you should go for men who stink! hahaha
just joking!
Keep on writing, Jess and Happy New Year! only 6 minutes to go!
Nooni
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This is another interesting poem that I have run across. We all go through that heartache at some time or another. And I think that you will one day feel strong enough to remove those pins and lovely freely again.
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This is a very deep and thoughtful poem. It describes how I have felt so many times perfectly. Keep it up.
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Sometimes love feels like you are a voodoo doll and those pins hurt alot when they are aimed at ones heart. I hope you find someone worthy of the love without the pain. This is a good read.
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