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Move

To move forward is to deviate.
To move backwards is to stay constant.
To give up is to settle for something less.
To hold on is to hold on forever.

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  • neenz
    January 4, 2007

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    Thats an interesting thought, "to hold on is to hold on forever". I like what you have expressed here. Thank you for the entry. -N


  • Jarrod
    January 3, 2007

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    not to shabby, i wish you luck in the contest. This poem has a good short on winning, even if there is 91 entries!


    • Delrondu
      January 3, 2007
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      thank you. glad you liked it cos i wasnt sure anyone would.