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Reservations & Revelations

Reservations...
Revelations

In between
a changing theme.
Pushing through
Nothing new

Except her mind
Now intertwined
Within her faith
Always safe
From those falls
and midnight calls
that plauge the past.
The black light cast
Without the power
Its dying hour
Sweeping, fleeting,
New light meeting
Forcing through me
Real life, I see.

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