Mother Earth, she gives us birth.
Then the fire lends Desire.
The Wind, the Air; it’s always there.
And Water is our daughter.
by: Amera Eileithyia
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My Sweet, I have been moved beyond words!
This quatrain speaks volumes. Earth = Birth, Fire = Desire, Wind (Air) = always there; and Water = daughter. and of couse... Amera = Princess!
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Great job in this one...i mostly enjoy short poems lyk this....THANK YOU!!!!!!!BYE!!!!!!!!!
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the flow was great and the read was nice loved it it was a good change from what i mostle read so to me it was good!!1
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fantasic
i really like this point of view it makes me think twice about how I,Me,We treat the earth.
very nice
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Thank you Jason... Your avatar scares me. Amera
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SO LOVELY!
I truly like the flow and your words say so much. everything about the earth is beautiful if we only stop and look. What the earth has to give us is life itself.
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I was gripped by this!
Very lovely flow to this, almost evolutionary in committement as this writing is. 'daughter', the true life of prosperity!
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Thank you Titus, you are very insightful, I really didn’t expect a man to read it never mind actually comment on it. Are you attached? Amera
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sorry, attached??
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You have so much talent in hendleling this type of rhythm and rime!Almost faultless!Splendid written!Well done!
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Ty MS coming from you that is a true complement.
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beautiful
very beautiful poem, about life, awesome write.
red roses
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Thank you so much RR, I appreciate it.
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