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cocaine and lolly pops

cocaine and lolly pops
she used to be beautiful
but these days she can't stop

bar fights and neon lights
she used to care
but these days she has no might

smoke haze and forgotten daze //d.a.y.s.//
she didn't used to be this way
now she's doing anything to get paid

love's embrace and a bruised face
she used to smile but now she cries
and she'll die draped in lace..

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  • rite
    December 30, 2006

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    The poem and your comment put a brick through the face. It is so sad to see a friend make choices that lead to destruction, while being unable to do anything about it. I saw many kids grow up alongside mine. They shared a lot when they were young, but over the years their ways have parted and life was kind to some and cruel to others. It is not all about the choices made, circumstance can also shape life into a situation few only know about and even fewer understand. Being so far apart as you wrote it seems there isn't much else to do than pray for her. I used to not believe in the power of prayer, but that now has changed through an act of mercy of The Light. I hope a similar thing will happen for your friend. Stay strong.

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  • ShatteredSilverStar
    December 30, 2006

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    actually, it's about my best friend. see i've known her since i was 8 years old and she's been through the abuse, drugs ect..she was clean for a year or so after moving in with her grandmother.,got with this guy and it all came back..and even though she isint doing drugs now it is back to the abuse verbal and physical with this guy she's been with for like a year and a half..but she lives 1400 miles away..so what's a girlfriend to do?


  • imperfectperfection
    December 30, 2006

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    Very Painful

    It seems this pain is directly related to you in the way of one of your loved friend perhaps who is this way because the heartfelt pain and tears of your eyes are very crystal clear and pure like those of himalayan waters. I'm sorry if this is personal but I hope I'm wrong. It is short & simple yet deals with the complex issue of seeing someone you care waste their life on drugs. I'm sorry for your hurt. Take Care & God Bless & may Lord bring back such wandered souls back home to safety and love.