Smile for me my love
Love me
Show it in your eyes
Sparks electrifying through me
Feel my sensual touch
Waves of heat consuming your body
Devour this rage within us
Complete with desire
Show what you can do
Present to me
what I do, to you
Surround me with your gentle wrath
Of excitment and pleasure
Such bliss
Erupting from this creative kiss
Surprise me with intensity
Feel me with roaming hands
With a secret part of me wet
I devulge my fantasies
You have me under your spell
Sparks shooting through me
Pleasure consuming me for the last time
You fill my desires
You fulfill my fantasies
You, my dear one
Complete me
A contest entry
- It;s A Love Type Of Thing by paintitblack1001.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a great write, i can't pick what part i like the most because i love the whole thing. good luck in the contest!
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thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
I wish you the best of luck in your contest as well. Have fun judging, lol Ik now sometimes it can be quite hard.
take care
xxx
~COURTNEY~
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I know we all have one that completes us, but how you described made it seem like it really is, ever so magical. I loved htis poem. That is one loved girl?maybe a guy?
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aww thanks
this was written for the love of my life (a guy) lol
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