What would you give for love and lets be honest
Have you any idea of what I'd give there for it?
All of my heart here for beginners and given freely
Take my soul, too...for that is where the heart lives
What about the biggest smile you can generate
Or looking softly into the eyes of the one you love?
Understanding that even with the consequences there
Love will prevail and that feeling you'll get is priceless
Daily, what would you give for love...baby...everything
Yes as a knight would protect his sweet maiden there's a vow
Oh to give a life if necessary for that is but a small price
Understanding that his maiden would be safe and sound
Going another route and this has to happen each day
It's to sacrifice even when nothing else matters
Very important is communication and being able to express
Everything is then on the table for love is that important
Forever dedicating and endlessly supplying emotions
Oh for the sake of love it must be given in abundance
Right from the very start there will always be passion
Letting the other win, too...even when you know its right
Over and over again kissing the tears and soothing the hurts
Very intimately show a love hat only two can share as one
Especially when I was asked...what would you give for love...EVERYTHING!
David
Author notes
any part of your family that is special...for it would be an honor to be a part, since I've known you for a couple of years now. you know the part that would suit me best...for I would abide by those very wishes...in a family today, one has to belong...as times are changing
A contest entry
- FAMILY FOR BLESSEDANGEL by JoyfulWriter.
450 points, ended February 12, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~~MAKE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU~~ by Sweetangelgrace.
475 points, ended February 24, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wowwww! Beautiful and sweet
I am breathless!!! I honestly did not know where to begin. This poem was really great. It has touched me in a way that is unexplainable. It really explains how the person feels and he can give for love but everything...
Hmmm...you melt my heart with your sweet words.
Wonderful poem and good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~
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We all would give everything for love and rightly so. Love is needed to survive and to blossom. Thanks for entering this in my contest. Good luck! Smiles, Terry
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Just beautiful and I so agree as I would give everything too, Bella
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I don't know..love is ephemeral to me..and there are so many kinds..the love of friends, family; agape love, eros..what are we talking about here? f; I'd applaud but I'm selfishly hording points for a contest
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a great question many people wouldn't have any idea what they would say...i would also give everything for love, it's that important.
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VERY BEAUTIFUL
YOU HAVE SUCH A WAY WITH WORDS:THEY GO STRAIGHT TO THE HEART AND HANG ON.YOU HAVE LEFT NOTHING OUT OF THIS POEM,HEART,SOUL,NEED,LOVE,SHAREING,and YES (EVERYTHING)YOU ARE A WONDERFUL POET!!!!
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What would you give for love ?
What would I give for love?...
What a mind and heart provoking question...is there any question more important than this, to know the answer?
You tell us above what you would give.
let me go ponder that question...
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