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In my woodland cabin
I awaken
to nature's light
Accompanied
by melodies from birds
I slowly sip tea
and Poetry;
admiring the wildflowers

In freshwater streams I bathe,
wash my hair with herbs
and rain;
maybe catch a fish
And in the evening
candlelight to read
or write
anything I wish

My favorite poets
visiting
while I dream



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  • individuality gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    cool poem i loved this bit

    In my woodland cabin
    I awaken
    to nature's light
    Accompanied
    by melodies from birds
    I slowly sip tea
    and Poetry;
    admiring the wildflowers


  • Eusebius
    May 1, 2008

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    bravo

    A wistful and lovely mood-evoking piece of poetry, the kind that can made the reader sigh... nifty, I liked this a great deal... bravo...


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    SO GENTLE AND LOVELY!!!

    This certainly sounds like the perfect day to me! 's


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 13, 2007

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    Most beautifully written!
    I very much enjoyed this fine piece of writing
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 28, 2007
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    beautiful~

    Congrats on the bronze...
    Where is this place...LOL can I go relax there...a catch a fish or two while I am there
    I entered this one too...didn't place but I had a good time writing it...also nice to meet you and hope you come read my entry as well
    Again congrats
    Susan~~~


  • Andi.
    March 14, 2007
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    very nice

    luv coop


  • forgotten-thurth
    January 26, 2007
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    Nicely written

    Nicely written the love the ider,, and the resting feel to it,, the simple things of life,,what a nice place to be away from the stress of life,, i did like reading this.. seen i cant sleep,, with to much on my mine ,, nice poem


  • Quixotically Yours
    January 19, 2007

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    This was a very soothing poem. My favorite line is definitely "I slowly sip tea and Poetry".

    Quietly expressive and very tranquil, like water in a stream. Thanks for entering my contest!


  • masterblaster gold member
    January 2, 2007

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    Hi aloneness can be a great thing as I have found out, this is an enchanting poem and was a pleasure to read,have a very happy new year, sound a wonderful place you go to,Di


  • Blueskywonder
    December 30, 2006

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    This is wonderfull poetry i really love the imagery portrayed in this piece, allmost felt like i was their


  • El Pescador silver member
    December 29, 2006

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    Pure magic

    This is me. For many years, this is where and how I spent every holiday. The solitude the surroundings and the ice cold waters of the stream. This is one of your best - I love it!

    Peter

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