Place your head against my shoulder
remain there til we're older
hold my hand while out at night
cuddle me whilst in fright
Place your lips upon my cheek
whisper secrets in my ear
tell me you love me too
speak of plans that will come true
Place your hands against my waist
and cuddle me without haste
see the love that's in my eyes
try to see past many crys
Place your heart in my soul
so our love can ever grow
let our hearts entwine to one
let me see you are the one.
Author notes
A womans wish
A contest entry
- Emotions by satan-.
950 points, ended July 14, 2008, 65 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Of The Best by Partners In Crime.
725 points, ended October 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It's not just a woman's wish (see your author note) it is every decent person's wish. That desire to be loved and understood and to have that person want the same thing. That's an eternal need.
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This is so beautiful!
Best of luck!
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This is so beautiful and really nice. Thank you for sharing!
Best of luck in the contest here
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This is such a beautiful love wish....and sometimes it even can come true
I know...I'm there
XXJeannette
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A womens wish indeed, awesome write! Good Luck in the contest!!!
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such sweet sentiments that one can truly relate too
best of luck
Tasha
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A beautiful poem here, it's one that most of us can very much relate with.
Good stuff
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This is very nicely done And My hope that all who have this wish will see it come true.
Good luck in the contest.
ED.
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Nicely Done
This is very nicely done my friend. I liked this very much. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Countrybabe
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Aweee, the feelings of love are grand indeedy and you've woven wonderful words to portray the feeling. Nice work kiddo
Best wishes always Dove
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Awesome
Hi Stardust100
This is so nice to read, everyone wants this for themselves well done
Good luck in the contest
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This is such a sweet, romantic poem What you write of is really what we all wish for in our lives.
Good job and I wish you best of luck in the contest
Dee
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Such a lot of emotion comes through with this poem. Very nice...good luck in the contest..
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Awwww...that is the sweetest thing! Wow, as much as it makes me feel all warm and happy, it also creates a sense of longing. very beautiful poem, thanks for entering!
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Really glad you liked
It comes from the heart
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isnt this that one love that everyone wants to find in his or her life.. just beautiful.. so lovely poem.. i guess the poet is too as sweet at the poem.. beautiful work my friend
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Thank you so glad you liked. This is an old write now but still one of my favourites
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Wishes come true
That type of LOVE everyone wants to grow old with!
Love it!
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Thank you glad you liked
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like more like LOVED
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beautiful. I loved the ending, it made me smile. Very sweet
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Many thanks
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i like it i can see you have feelings for this person. thats good
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Thank you
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