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Dream Scare

Dreams

Are you scared?

Crumpled into the corner of the minds eye watching

Thinking, can this be?

In the darkness tiny red slivers begin flooding the floor

As they rise I watch my life's faults in fast forward

Slivers turning into long thin chains of razor blades

Quickly dancing circles around me

This is crazy, I'm getting me dizzy

Their getting closer don't move!

As the razors edge begins to tear my flesh

Snap!

I'm in another room.

Here, people mangled, battered and distraught

The air is tight

It's hard to breath

The stench of their rotting flesh choking me

Pulling and clawing at my skin and clothes I scream

Stop please stop!!! You're hurting me!!!

Cold sticky hands begin covering my mouth and nose

I can't breath!!

Snap!

I'm in another room.

Here, crouched in the corner, a lady crying and scared

Reaching out for comfort with a surprise

Screaming in fear as she looked into my eyes

It's me!!!

Turning to run

Snap!

I'm in another room.

Here, its humid and dark

I can't see anything

Quiet so loud it makes my hair stand on end

What's that?

Its cold as ice running up my back

As it begins to squeeze my neck tight I panic

Help, please someone help!

No words escape my lips

Again please someone help!

Again nothing

Tears being to flow

Snap!

I'm in another room

Here, I'm in a box

I can't move

What the hell!!

What the hell!!

What the hell!!

Voices telling me relax, accept my fate

I can't!! I just can't!!

Why won't anyone help me!!

Struggling to get free wears me weak

One last breath

Snap!

Hovering above watching

As they cover the coffin

Tears are shed by only one, me



























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When dreams eat you alive

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  • Justified Inc.
    December 30, 2006
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    Way cool!

    Your writing is vivid and captures one's attention from start to finish. Well written fantastic imagination and imagery. Reads like something right out of a Steven King novel. Exellent talent and thanks for sharing it!
    castaway

    PS Loved the background went so well with the images!