Dreams
Are you scared?
Crumpled into the corner of the minds eye watching
Thinking, can this be?
In the darkness tiny red slivers begin flooding the floor
As they rise I watch my life's faults in fast forward
Slivers turning into long thin chains of razor blades
Quickly dancing circles around me
This is crazy, I'm getting me dizzy
Their getting closer don't move!
As the razors edge begins to tear my flesh
Snap!
I'm in another room.
Here, people mangled, battered and distraught
The air is tight
It's hard to breath
The stench of their rotting flesh choking me
Pulling and clawing at my skin and clothes I scream
Stop please stop!!! You're hurting me!!!
Cold sticky hands begin covering my mouth and nose
I can't breath!!
Snap!
I'm in another room.
Here, crouched in the corner, a lady crying and scared
Reaching out for comfort with a surprise
Screaming in fear as she looked into my eyes
It's me!!!
Turning to run
Snap!
I'm in another room.
Here, its humid and dark
I can't see anything
Quiet so loud it makes my hair stand on end
What's that?
Its cold as ice running up my back
As it begins to squeeze my neck tight I panic
Help, please someone help!
No words escape my lips
Again please someone help!
Again nothing
Tears being to flow
Snap!
I'm in another room
Here, I'm in a box
I can't move
What the hell!!
What the hell!!
What the hell!!
Voices telling me relax, accept my fate
I can't!! I just can't!!
Why won't anyone help me!!
Struggling to get free wears me weak
One last breath
Snap!
Hovering above watching
As they cover the coffin
Tears are shed by only one, me
Author notes
When dreams eat you alive
Comments
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Way cool!
Your writing is vivid and captures one's attention from start to finish. Well written fantastic imagination and imagery. Reads like something right out of a Steven King novel. Exellent talent and thanks for sharing it!
castaway
PS Loved the background went so well with the images!


