I told you I liked you
but you just said 'I know'
After that you and I were
'just friends', but I wish it to be more
We would tickle and laugh
and just have a blast
but then we would remember
that we were 'just friends'
Now months later we're still
friends and ometimes we
would go back in time
and tickle once more
But in the end I wish
we were more than
'just friends'
Author notes
The picture is my of my dog. I felt like having her pic up here
In a list
A contest entry
- Anything Contest by PrettyxoxPoison.
300 points, ended April 10, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love is just around the corner ? by The Hardest Goodbye.
300 points, ended June 20, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I would like constructive critisisim on this please!!!
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Thanks! I hope everything works out for your situation.
Unfortunatly it did not for me.
The guy I liked graduated this year, going to college in the fall and I have not talked to him since his last day of school. I am however going to Alaska with him and the rest of my vnture crew. 
So you never know
<3
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yea. i'm in the same situation now actually. Awesome poem!!! <3 good luck in my contest!
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Thank you! I'm so happy you like it & I'm glad I'm not the only one! I still have feelings for the guy too, it basically sucks
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Simple
i love this poem, just cuz im in that predictament right now. It so simple and so right. Its great
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Thankjs you so much for the comment. And thanks for pointing that one out
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Nicely done, it's very true and real i know a lot of people encluding myself that have been through this.
umm on the 10th line you wrote(ometimes, i think you ment sometimes lol) other then that i really like it. very real and very true! -
Thanks This was one of my first poems I wrote here on AP> I wrote it about the guy who I thought I loved.
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whoa! I can totally relate to this poem and i know EXACTLY how you feel it sucks! well thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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Good to know I'm not alone.
Yea he and I are friends I suppose, I am best friends with his sister so its tough to be friends with him too because she is all like why? lol Siblings. -
i think everyone has gone through this. I did. Were still friends and he has a gf so i guess that will work for me. As long as we can always stay friends.
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Aaaaw... same with me, again. I feel the same way about a guy, except that I knew him a long time ago and he most likely doesn't remember his little sisters old friends to well...
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excellent!!!
awwwww how sweet you should tell him again and again lol well done 
love stevie
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smiles
Simple
But it tells your story
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Thanks.
It does doesn't it? *laughs*
Have a great New Year!
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Welcome to Allpoetry
Sometimes knowing that we might not get something makes us want it just that much more. Set your goals and you will eventually find that special someone that is also a friend. Love has a powerful grip and you never know what the future will bring you. Keep an open heart and all should fall into its place. This poem is very good and I enjoyed the read very much. I wish you much happiness Thank you for sharing your words with all of us here. I would like to take this opportunity to welcome you to AllPoetry. I know being new to a site you may have a few questions or concerns, so please feel free to ask any greeter or use the "Help" tab at the top of your page Dove
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Give Peas A Chance!!!!
I think that you should keep going, but this is still a new step in your poetic life! Just keep going and let the words flow out onto the page in your true feelings!
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