Come my child lay down
And look upon these stars
Did you know they are gods up their
Just looking down at us
That's the big dipper
If you follow those two stars
You'll see the little dipper
And find the northern star
Astronomy is the study
Of the heavens above
Astrology the story's
Of the shapes in the stars
Their is Orions Belt
And their his mighty sword
He is a might gaint
Protecting us all
There's Aries, and Sagittarius
Taurus the bull
Can you make out the shapes
Let's try a few more
Over their is Gemini
They call them the twins
Over there is Scorpio
And Aquarius is the age we're in
So let's do this again
Trace the stars with our fingers
Lets count the kings and gods we find
On a crisp cool winters night
Author notes
For the Children, A whimsical poem, I think parents have forgotten this one.
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A contest entry
- Come champions of my sweet princesses... by Iohagh.
850 points, ended January 15, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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GREAT
hey,Charlie I'm Cory I like your poem it is great I hope you write a another one see you bye -
Write on!
You've still got what it takes, dear Author!!
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This is a wonderful whimsical poem to share for all children and adults! At least this adult... loves the stars above and always takes the time out to look at them! Wonderful write as always Charlie!! I wish you all the best!
Happy New Year!
Linda
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Welcome to your contest wishing you the best...
Darling
Whimpical, "whimsical", star, "stars"
leaves you perfectly contrite
correcting articulation by far
focuses constellations at night.
Smoosh
Janet
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Very cute, a wonderful write to for the children. I will have to share this one with my son he loves to study the heavens. We use to spend hours trying to find the different shapes of the signs. He could find the big dipper before I could. Very sweet right.
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happy happy happpppyyy
since ive heard about astronmy ive alwys been confused but wow this poem explains it all,
its so good that uve writen a poem on atronmy although i dont belive in it but yep its amazing
it really does explain it hope to see another poem from u soon thank- you take care everyone
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