if shooting stars
granted more
than a shadow of hope
would we wish at all?
we are almost
like the plastic soldiers
engaged in the
crusades of the minds
worth only the plastic they melt
in rage
savvy?
polar bonds
are the strongest
the science would have us believe
but doesn’t one molecule
get sucked
into the other?
doesn’t it lose
itself
in the chaos of
our infinite variety?
interpret me
how you will
while we balance
on the edge
of urges
squandered away
one leg buried;
two feet under
rejections and
salt-water fish
we walk in a moon-shaped
tour of life;
to the left, the stars
grant pocketfuls of hope
to the right –
savvy?
A contest entry
- Prewrites - What ever you like! by dutch2lips.
400 points, ended August 4, 434 entries
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Comments
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impressive write, thank you for entering
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you
are way better than I will ever be, and much more brilliant than I ever even thought I was. good write.
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and this is quite a savvy bit of writing here.it sets your mind to twirling and you just want answers and then you want the wise words to continue.fantastic.
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idiot
savvy means: do you understand, is it clear enough for you?
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