The world beneath you
craves your soul.
Wanting your sacrifice.
Tasting blood
in their mouths.
Fixated on your demise,
your failure.
Broken flesh...
wounded soul...
Haunting demons inside
slowly wake to your calling.
Bringing forth your fury.
Unleash the wrath
of the devil and all of hell.
Bound for eternal damnation
upon death.
Broken soul...
enter death...
Author notes
favorite animal.....wolf
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This is an awesome poem. I love the imagery and the end rhyme was perfect. I really enjoyed the pace of this piece too. It was quick, but puncturing, if you get what I mean. It's a really beautiful piece. Alyssa
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Definitely an attention grabber... I really like the flow and wording of this piece. Wolves are actually one of my favourite animals so that makes me happy. Good Luck!!
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ITS SHORT!!!!!!!!! finally something i will read!
i likey!
im kinda writing something like this now...
u need to write more short things!!! and dark!!!
~A n g e l E y e s~
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Terrific write kiddo. You did great on this dep and dark piece. But you do like this style of poetry. Great job, keep up the good work, make mommy proud.
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Awesome write. I like it alot.
Be Well
Emerald
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this is wonderfuly done... dark and deep,, I like it..
well done..
Krystal
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nice dark write you did good here.
I love you
Elizabeth
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