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Behind The Mask (Rondelet)

Behind the mask
There is a troubled heart and soul
Behind the mask
Though in sunshine she seems to bask
Life's travails have taken their toll
Never again will she be whole
Behind the mask.

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  • BrittlesSkittles
    January 31
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    full of mystery and intriguing structure. loved it! great take on the prompt! =]


  • willowprincess
    February 19, 2007
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    short yet full of pain. i wanted to shed a tear for this woman. good job, and good luck.

  • Suzanne Dia
    December 29, 2006

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    Don't misunderstand my frowny face. This touched a painful place for me. Very nice.

    Good luck and thank you for entering.