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I still love you

When something so sweet and right comes your way
What ever you do, don’t let it fly away
Even if you get hurt by it
Hold on, and take the shit
Because you could have something special

I know how you feel, having your heartbroken before
And crying on the floor
Late at night and in the dark
So you're out of sight
But things with brighten up

I know people think I'm crazy for what happened in the past
But somehow I know this love with last
Even though you're far away
It's with you my heart lays

So when people think you're crazy
Take it all in and smile
Cause no one knows what life has for us

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  • a means to an end
    January 17, 2007

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    thats awesome

    omg thats a crazy poem! i really really really liked this poem. it was so full of emotion and i really liked this part the bestest

    I know how you feel, having your heartbroken before
    And crying on the floor
    Late at night and in the dark
    So you're out of sight
    But things with brighten up

    I know people think I'm crazy for what happened in the past
    But somehow I know this love with last
    Even though you're far away
    It's with you my heart lays

    its soo amazing the way ur emotions are expressed here. great write