tell me what you see inside
what this lovely mask could hide
all your love will be denied
see you standing on the outside
golden thread spun in design
on velvet cloth as my disguise
step into my lovely shrine
are you worthy of this prize
come and kiss these lovely lips
lovely full in poisoned teal
nothing here can cause an eclipse
oh the joys that you feel
look deeply into my emerald eyes
see those I have embraced
watch the fire and hear their cries
it’s time they were replaced
step into my lovely shrine
kiss my poisoned lips of teal
you are here by my design
wondrous ecstasy you will feel
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pick a Picture! Any Picture! by mantis180.
450 points, ended January 21, 2007, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - GO for the Gold~ 2nd Chance ~ Sorry Closing earlier then planned~ by Florida Sunshine.
800 points, ended May 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW ~ you just missed a contest called the "Mask" this poem would had been Perrrrrrfic for~ It's a terrific write~ VERY well done~ Thanks so much for entering my 2nd chance contest!
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Bear ~
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This is beautiful, I love the flow of it, the beauty you created, the rythm, and the rhyme, and the imagery, poisoned lips of teal... very seductive write.
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As always you hold a golden pen Mom, your writings are all exquisitery in every magical sense, Bella
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This is a lovely poem you have penned here, your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem good luck in the contest
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Thank you I loved the picture it spoke volumes in it's silence.
*Go with God* my frien
Valerie
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