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Salvation is Blind

There’s been a shred of new evidence!
Listen to me!
My knowledge is golden,
So fresh off the tree.
I’m telling you truth, I’m setting you free.
I’m giving you glory,
Just listen to me.

I know what you want!
I know what you need!
You can never be stopped,
We can only succeed.
You’ve been locked in a cage,
And I have the key,
So lend me your ears
And listen to me.

I know where you live!
I know where you sleep!
I’ll make your life heaven,
Oh, the bounty you’ll reap.
Follow my word
And your eyes will soon see.
My offer’s short lasting,
So listen to me.


There’s a dog in the alley!
And a cat in the tree!
Your eyes still deceive you,
Despite what you see.
I have something to hide,
With a trick up my sleeve,
I really have nothing,
Or nothing has me.

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  • Defective Soul
    December 30, 2006

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    Well this ones different. I really like it too. The flow and rhyming are really good. But my fave part is the end. Keep it up and good luck in my contest.