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A Symbol

Drowning in your eyes,
Love! So strong, overcomes me.
...My lips, they touch yours.

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A kiss, a simple touch of two people's lips, is a symbol of great love and affection!

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    so simple, yet so elegantly profound. this was well penned.


  • crimsonfury
    January 8, 2007

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    What you said about a kiss is so true. And your haiku definitely reflected that with words. Beautiful and well written.

    Thankyou very much for entering my contest!


  • penciledlives
    December 30, 2006
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    Aww...it is, isn't it?

    *joins contest too* good luck to you and me!