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Hug Me Wind, Hug me!

 
   
    Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh! Blow me off, penetrate through my utmost depths-
I challenge you, I challenge you to find me the rootest!
Blow through me, kiss me, kick me, love me, hate me,
I don’t care wind, but I stretch my hands to hug you!

So lift me wind, pollinate pages of me, allover, oh wind!
Carry my sweat to Swift cloudy sky, let it drain, oh wind!
So let more of me produce, more of the voice, let it be,
For at least once, the god shall hear my cries, oh wind!
For at least once, he may know that I exist, a human exist!

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh! Give me rods to balance me, I have been crippled,
Give me a tongue to speak, I have been made a dumb,
Give me an ear; I have been beaten into a deaf being!
I beg you wind; give me a heartiest hug wind, a hug!

World has torn my flesh, but didn’t let me scream aloud,
Oh Wind! Please, cure this ailment, hug me with medics!
Go through the times, ask everything, a cure? A cure?
World has crippled me, deafen, made me a dumb, a devil.
Oh Wind! I have no one, be my sister, tie me in a rakhi,
and untie my eyes that world made, so that I don’t weep!

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh! Sway away my needs from me, my greed from me,
Give the spring a call, let the spring be awaken again,
Give the spring a call, let spring awaken me once again.
I beg- wind, give me hug, a blow, a slap, wind, oh wind!

Give a porthole, let me escape to the Judgment day,
Where I shall be measured, sum of evils & goods I did.
Oh wind, I have loads of repents on each unit of me,
Give me some strength to lift them till the end, oh wind!
And at last, an act where I can hide my loads, oh wind!

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh wonderest! What the Christ expected, what am I?
Oh wind! Carry the expectations, the dreams of lord,
To me, oh wind! Help me to reconstruct my roots!

The time had chained me and my tongue lies locked,
Webs of lies of life lie all around my ears, oh wind!
Oh wind, go through the doorsteps of the Smith,
The Smith, ask him for the key, price I shall pay,
Oh wind, I beg wind, help me wind, hug me wind!

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh cure me wind! And I shall stand till end on woods,
I shall serve my blood on and on, until you wind,
Free me from, this reincarnation, I want freedom wind!

So, blow me wind, oh wind, give me a slap, one more,
Push me with all your might, in the right way of three.
I am indebted, to all the ones who said, ‘they made me’
I am indebted, to world who is said to ‘modernized me’
I am indebted to lord, sage and olds who, ‘made me’.

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
I have nothing to pay off my debts, oh wind enrich me!
I have no service to world, wind make me an able man!
I have no words to thank, oh wind be my master!

Oh wind, I have performed many stages of theaters.
Hug me wind, with all the knowledge you gathered!
Hug me wind, with all the experiences you collected!
So to carry all my responsibilities allover this platform,
Once and for all the times to come and be ago.

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Surprise me, with each hug you give, a gift to me,
After all you traveled all seven cities of diamond,
Hug me with each of them, enrich me by it’s essence.

Oh wind! Send my prayers to both the brothers,
Oh Saviors! Let you live again in me. Oh wind!
Oh wind! Hug me till; He the one hears it all,
And agrees to be my support, my shadow,
To raise a mutiny, a revolt, a rage, oh wind!

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
The Christ and the Chrishna, sow them in me!
Oh wind! Bring them from the eternal universe,
So let these two brother be one today!

Oh wind! Let there be grafting of the saviors!
Oh wind! Let the justice be double, be magnified!
Let the Satan, let the devil, let the evil, be-
Crucified now, and not the truth, Oh wind-
It’s a beggar’s order- bring the crown!

Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Oh Wind! Oh Wind! I spread my hands to hug you!
Now let you, the sister of the sons of the Wordsmith,
The sister of the World-Smith, hug me! To generate,
Me, an able personality to withhold powers of ashes.

And now wind, since you have already ploughed me,
And sown in me the seeds of twins. Let the roots sprout,
Tear apart me, let it germinate through my rootest,
I shall bear. But no more shall world, bear & make bear.
Thank You, Wind! I hug you wind!

 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    April 15, 2007

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    I thought I better come over and see who "Pole Star" is Especially since you have left such wonderful comments on my poetry.

    This poem is more than poetry...it is a celebration of a humble life. I adore this piece and I will read more of you. Love, Lane

  • pozo
    April 15, 2007

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    Good piece- quite long. I liked your use of repetition here although it was a little too much. This was a good piece which showed your love of the wind well. Good luck in the contest
    Pozo


  • Ontarah
    March 19, 2007

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    I really like this combination of Krishna and Christ. "The Christ and the Chrishna, sow them in me" It brings the east forward in a way the west can understand. There are certainly many parallels between them something that is noted in the writings of Swami Vivekananda who I enjoy reading. The poetry in this is astounding more like a song really. It flows just like a sacred Indian text. This is a very unique and creative write. I also like the lines"Let the Satan, let the devil, let the evil, be-
    Crucified now, and not the truth" Evil is evil and more than one religion recognizes the need to remove it. Thanks for the entry and good luck.


  • Cherokee
    March 13, 2007
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    That blew me away... get it... wind?


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 11, 2007

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    Very unique write here - topic quite unusual and yet youhave written this with such passion and flair. Liked the presentation - colour, picture and poem all fit together very well.


  • Rita Krocha
    January 11, 2007

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    Excellent

    This one's just Lovely! The wind certainly has much more to do with us than just blow...hehehe!Soaring imaginations! Well penned!


  • -Ink Artist-
    January 11, 2007

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    Very imaginative write! You've created a very rhythmic feel to these lines. It's a little too repetitive for my taste, but the piece itself is very prolific. It's obvious you spent a lot of time on this write and that makes it most worthy of my applause.

    ~Lori


  • Tam
    January 10, 2007
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    Wow...I'll applaud simply for the effort

    you put forth into typing this one!
    Very well done!
    Blessings!
    Tammy


  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 10, 2007

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    An interesting write. Very nice imagery and flow. I think the repetition takes away from the piece.

  • emperork
    January 10, 2007

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    GREAAAAAAAAAAATTTT!

    Talk of it you do like Aesir of the winds,
    Fresh love blooms through joyful soul, amidst the black fiends,
    Torments you dare bare O selfless lover of the winds.

    Hey gotta keep ur poem short man!(Bluffing,coz I don't like to read very long ones, you can try shorter ones like I do)

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    January 9, 2007

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    I love your picture and background, it adds so much to this write. a very unique write and one that I was happy to have read, I like how you make reference in the end of this to the two as twins..." and sown into me the seeds of twins" that solidifies the concept of one mind/ one being amongst the two. nice job here.


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    January 9, 2007

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    Is this a song? it sure appears to be! It was very engrossing and rhythmic, love the imagery. your border reminds me of maa's work, are you familiar? Anyway, an ambitious and captivating write, well done!


  • SoS
    December 29, 2006

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    This was very good. The reader gets a sense of wanting to be carefree, but not quite being there yet. And I very much admire this top picture. Krishna, am I correct?

    Anyway, the picture, in all of it's irony, helps accent the poem.

    =)

    • The Pole Star
      December 29, 2006
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      Thanks a lot, anyways, you are correct...the image is Krishna and Christ, the background is Krishna-Radha!


  • Ocean Eyes
    December 29, 2006

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    wow what an interesting poem. even the title sorta jumps out at you.it is certainly something that catchs your eye.you have an amazing talent. keep writing


  • Frodofan silver member
    December 28, 2006
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    No, I understand. That's precisely why I thought it was odd - the two different religious figures combind. It is interesting though.

    • The Pole Star
      December 28, 2006
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      oh! Actually, I thought just like that before...but you know that as I got through the net I came to know that there are over 100s of similarities between the two gods...that's why I called the two gods twins


  • Confusicus
    December 28, 2006
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    Or in short, Hug me wind.


  • Frodofan silver member
    December 28, 2006

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    Well I think you could have said the same thing in fewer words. It's certainly a cool concept, talking to the wind and all. Sometimes I wish I could just be wished off into the air myself. A very odd picture you have with it too. Interesting. Keep writing.

    • The Pole Star
      December 28, 2006
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      but anyways thanks for the critique and PLEASE don't say the phots- odd...the image shows Jesus and Krishna, plus the background shows Krishna with his "Gopia" Radha...

      It is all about giving the narrator some power, to face the real world outside who has torn his flesh but didn't let him scream...the narrotor begs the two holy dities, the Saviors of Earth to come again on earth in the form of the narrator himself. In other words, he wants the god in him to be awakened.

      To clarify it, Christ is the god of Christanity and Krishna is the god of Hinduism. It is concidered that both the gods are onepersonality because of the striking similarities existing between the two i.e. why I said Christ and Chrishna or I could have said Krist and Krishna

      Getting me here?

    • The Pole Star
      December 28, 2006
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      please Frodo, we will havea talk about this later...I guess that you didn't get the idea.

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