Calling her Dove
The cries you let out
Stop calling this bird
Your Dove has gone south
Never looking back
North south east and west
In search of true love
Stop bringing a downcast
This bird is set free
Cages blow out
Gates unlatch
Wings flap about
Free at last
Author notes
it says it all in the poem...just about an ex-bf who can't stop calling me the pet name he gave me...even after we've been apart for over 3 years.
A contest entry
- Anything and everything! Prewrites allowed by lucy sky-diamond.
1100 points, ended February 6, 2007, 84 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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very deep and powerful
some things are never forgotten yet, mysteries as to why will never be solved understood or even let go.
Yet your words say many things with a rythem only you could achieve and beautiful wording, your writing has taken a turn for best I see more heart, more emoition, more power, to touch where it should.
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wow i love the wording in this poem and the... i dont even know what to say but it is amazing this poem really kept my attention and it is verry well written. i have and ex bf who still calls me his pet names for me.... it gets kinda annoying huh. aneyway i loved the poem. your a great writer. if you would like id love if you wrote something for my conetes i love your wrighting style
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a very well wriiten poem indeed, i agree with fallower. thanks for the great entry, and good luck in the contest
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I'm a very big fan on simplicity, so right off the bat, I knew I would enjoy reading this even before I began. And I gotta say, this is very well written. After going over your thoughts here a few times actually, I'm amazed!!! This is what poetry is supposed to represent!!! Our inner most thoughts even sometimes the ones that are right there on the very surface of our hearts!!!!
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"free at last"! lol nice write, like how u used "dove" as a pun 4 d petname and an actual bird! question.. did u like the pet name at all? keep up the good work
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i kinda liked it but it was from an ex like from 4 years ago and he won't let it go and i finallly yelled at him about it lol
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Hey girlie just popped over to see what's new.I hope you guys are good.This was lovely and reflects your mood and thoughts so well.
~helen
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thankies...ya it's not from chris but the guy before chris...
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great write!
IT says it i the title! Great write...
Blessed Be
Green Mother Rose
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thank you i'm glad you liked it.
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