In the relm of darkness
A heart beats faintly
Silent, by broken love
Hope cast in the depths of an ocean of salty tears
Days fade into nights
Where dreams of love
Scream out in the silence
Of the heart's cavern walls
Within the cold of darkness
The heart protected by wistful dreams
Light flashes over the horizon
As the sun rises to meet the moon
A flutter within the heart
The warmth of each ray upon the flesh
Of this heart's capture
Reviving hope
Releasing it from the depth of the ocean of tears
No longer does it taste of salt
But, the scents of a fresh April rain
Where life is renewed
As the light touches the darkness
The dreams burn into longing
Hungry for loves passion
As the relm of darkness fades
The heartbeat grows
To the power of a beating drum
Desires now rage
Longing to erupt
Like the lava
Of the mighty volcano
Lust intensifing
Longing to taste the kiss of light
Aching to feel the heat
As it burns into the soul
Cooling as the holders
of light and hope
Melt into
The bliss of love
In ecstacy
A contest entry
- I want to Feel The Fiery Passion by EternalFyre.
450 points, ended February 20, 2007, 39 entries
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I loved the whole light and darkness theme that kept appearing, and its true love and passion are like light and dark intertwining together into one, creating a feeling. Good luck in the contest!
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Wow
You open up on this one June, So lusty,passionate, I love this side of you, You got me hot, Write on Poet
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This is certainly a very powerful poem with many strong images. I especially liked the second line. You may want to check spelling on "lova" which I think should be "lava" and "estacy" which I believe should be "ecstasy".
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BEAUTIFUL AND HEARTFELT !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my June, I know this feeling so well. You have captured it so amazingly well with your words. It just says all I am feeling at the moment. You take me through my feelings with such beauty. Thank you for sharing. You take care, Sandy
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June you make love so beautiful make it turn to passion and make that passion turn to such feelings of aching as you say the longing for love.
Your words unfold into my mind as i look into my heart and see the love there and the one who put love into my world I am so aware of the intensity and power of love.Your words glow in its reflection. June you show your talented pen in the words and your beautiful heart in their meanings. Keeping the faith alive hun I am thinking 2007 better than this old year so take life in both hands and hang onto love a perfect write I am glad i waited till night fell before i read this post.thank you for the pleasure.
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