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~*Seraph*~

 



Angelic voice

          sings a whispered song

                            of blissful serenity

 

 

Triple wings of feathered purity

wrap

&

embrace

with a tender loving touch

 

 

Sapphire glaciers

            warmly gaze upon me

                   in silent understanding

 

 

Illuminating golden halo

shines

&

shimmers

lighting a new path to venture

 

 

Celestial hands

                    not leading,

                        not following,

                    but instead,

              beside me,

      guiding me

 

 

Radiate beauty

of light

&

of love

true essence of a

                                ~Seraph~


Author notes

Option #7


For Mel (luckynsincere)

I have had the word Seraph coming to mind for the past 3 days and each time it has I have seen your face. So to you I write this, Mel for to me you are an Angel, but not just any angel.........you are one in the highest order of God's Angels.



Thank you for gracing my life with such kindness, love, friendship and another sister.


Love you Mel

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  • tawk gold member
    March 1, 2007
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    Wow what a beautiful write. I so enjoyed reading it. Good luck in my contest


  • Sweetangelgrace
    February 28, 2007

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    THis is the most beautifull poem ive ever heard! i read it and the harmony between the words, the context and the way it is expressed is just absolutely fantastic, perfect. I would like to congradulate the poet who wrote it, as he has so much talent! thank you for making me enjoy it so much!

    Good luck in my contest!

    ~~GRACE~~


  • Namita
    December 31, 2006

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    This is a very beautiful write. A wonderful addition to my contest indeed! Very beautifully crafted to make the impeccable perfection here. Superb.
    This is my favorite stanza,

    Celestial hands
    not leading,
    not following
    but instead,
    beside me,
    guiding me.

    I loved the way you used line breaks. Just so wonderful. Best of luck in the contest and of course, A WONDERFUL NEW YEAR WISH.



    Luv,
    Candy
    ** Bunny loves the work! **


  • luckynsincere
    December 30, 2006

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    -wipes tears-

    I am simply amazed by your sweetness. How can I not stand by you? You are the best of friends, and are always there for me. Your kindness and loving ways often is just what I need to make it through the day. you are so very important to me. I cherish you.. I must say that you are an angel... a sneaky one.. but nonetheless you are there glowing with comfort. It is quite easy to understand you... you should know that we are connected much deeper than most. I feel the connection... we have the same blood in our veins... no matter how may centuries ago we were sisters... the blood is still as thick as ever.

    I love you.
    Mel


  • Blazing White Wolf
    December 28, 2006
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    oh this is beautiful and for such a lovely woman! This does have that gentle serene feel to it just like out lil fay great write, My lioness

    love and light,
    Blaze


  • PrincessSAMaRa
    December 28, 2006
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    This is simply beautiful and breathtaking.A very sweet poem.A fanatastic write that really does make you think if an angel as you read. The picture complements the poem itself. Great job! Keep writing!

  • Chailyn
    December 27, 2006

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    This is beautiful and so serene. I love angels, all angels. Guaridan angels are my favorite but I also like Seraphins. This picture is beautiful as well.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 27, 2006

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    excellent~

    Oh
    I love this and I like the font and form you used also....
    Love the picture as well....and the imagery is exceptional...
    Love ya
    Susan~~~


  • Providence
    December 27, 2006

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    Such inspired beauty, This is simply the essence of the poet captured upon the screen,

    I love the part about not leading, but guiding.
    It just drips with adoration!

    Namaste!
    Marianne


  • Amera gold member
    December 27, 2006

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    well done

    Wonderful, I love it; you captured the image perfectly and with emotion. I was intrigued with the helical structure; it made the read more fun. Well done. Amera


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 27, 2006
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    Liked the shape of this piece, how it flows from line to line; the font used and the wonderful message it conveys sin these lines. The brevity of some of the lines make it quite unique and add to the meandering appeaerance of the poem.

  • rvh1956
    December 27, 2006

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    Awesome.

    Celticmoon, your words made me relate to something that happened to me just recently. I was using Skype to leave a message for a friend and this most wonderful song was coming though the Internet. I felt like they were singing away everything that ever made us forget heaven or what was before there could be pain of any kind. Thank you for sharing this here. Rich.


  • Aeonna
    December 27, 2006
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    Whoa

    Very beautiful poem, celtic. you are awesome poet.

    GREAT WORK

    red roses

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