I want to be your crescent moon
smile down upon you all night
bring you many moments of wonder
watch over you as you sleep
I want to be the one who is always there,
no matter where you walk
simply turn and look up
there I am smiling at you
I don't want to run your life or own you
just be allowed to watch and
be there for you to share
all of your private thoughts with
In your moments of need or sorrow
you can turn to me and I will
come to you with my soft light
and gently chase the shadows away
I want to be your crescent moon
smile down upon you all night
bring you many moments of wonder
watch over you as you sleep
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This Was a breathtaking write... *wink*
You are truly a word smith, taking me into a wonderland, where the 'moon' is the guide... The words you use, fell in perfect place to give the true meaning... Of a tender love, that can shake a world...
Well done, Allan...
As always I loved it...
Keep the pen flowing with ink that never fade...
Elmarie
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Yes, thank you. This poem inspired my current picture.
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this is a beautiful poem I love the 4th stanza, it so tender and loving..
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Why thank you.
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A delightful write...
A delightful write; like you, I love the night sky. I have written a piece called "Evening Sky".
I'm also a Maine-iac; I even have a page of traits posted on my website - you may get a chuckle from this: http://www.bunganutlake.org/maineiacs.htm -
what a lovely write ...here you display your heart so eloquenty well ...
I would love to say love to you but then you may miscontrue my amiable intentions with a less innocent one ...maybe if you would give me the name that you would prefer to addressed as , then we could move along in a more easier , carefree footing....again beautiful piece!!!
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Oh, pshaw! I was just teasing you. That is what Maineiacs do. If you seem very serious, we feel we need to balance things out.
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Dearest One
I am sufficiently balanced out ...We have just been acquainted ...I do not take too much for granted . As I learn your ways ,I will be inclined to be less stiff in future dealings . Friendship and and easy comraderie takes time to build so they can last , but I am sure that You already know this ...
luv
J
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