fear
people might
discover this uncover
my soul so fragile
attention-addicted?
wish
someone would
read this listen
to me and my
problems
dozens
and dozens
of roses around
me blossoms and
blood
marry
the word
its meaning means
what i might never
feel
sins
deadly ones
commited by me:
lust, envy, gluttony, wrath
suicide
how
do you
know me so
well not knowing my
love
poems
little pieces
of trashy lyric
everywhere on my comp
wasted
cuts
or scars
fading away like
memories can be
renewed
once
once more
just for me
one fulfilling of my
longing
sorrowful
can i
look at your
face knowing you
felt
love
hate passion
sinful emotions commited
by a girl loathing
herself
notes
and notes
on my dashboard
passing by fleeing away
horizon
Author notes
Those Haikus followed “Married in May“...I didn't put them in a special row or anything...
Some Haikus flowing out of my mind the other day. Good or bad?
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unique.powerful in a way I can't explain.
"cuts
or scars
fading away like
memories can be
renewed"
Favoritist part.
great write.interesting rythm.strong words tied to strong emotions.keep it up or i'll have something to say about it
love Shi
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Don't worry
I don't post everything but most of my stuff 
you'll get lots of it soon 
I love your comments and you 
It feels so good to finally have you back
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ooo very well written hun, i like it. keep up the good work,
take care
XoXoXoX
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ooohhhh they are so coool. i was amazed that my attention span stayed with me while i was reading. i felt a little add before i got on ap today. so, how do you write a haiku any way, i want to try and write one my self they look easy but i know that i say that about most of the poetry i want to try and then they end up being realy hard. that is why i like just free write poetry the best. i dont have to follow any rules and i can just be my self. it looks like you can stay true to your self wven when you follow the rules. i think you have some real talent. thanks for shareing.
love the rain
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wow, that is amazing!! Interesting. I have to try this, too. Thanks for sharing!
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