Laughing at the stars
Howling at the moon
Who would've ever imagined
Me going crazy over you?
Fell in love with all your lies
But hated all the truths
Lost within your eyes
Sucked again into the blues
Wiping away the tears
I never thought I'd cry
Wishing you were here
But hoping that you die
Just another stupid bitch
Another girl to fill your time
How dare you say you love me
To get inside my mind
How dare you call me baby girl
How dare you hold my hand
How dare you ask what's wrong
And pretend you understand
Bet you're sorry that you lost me
Didn't think that I'd survive
Bet you didn't think I'd have the strength
To leave your sorry ass behind
I'll ask you just one question
Before I say goodbye
I want to know the truth
I have to ask you why
Why did you make me crazy
Why did you go and break my heart
All I can say is F*** you
For tearing my world apart
F*** all your apologies
F*** all your stupid lies
All I can is F*** you
F*** you and goodbye
Author notes
This is about my first boyfriend ever, the only guy I ever let break my heart. Sorry bastard cheated on me with my best friend (my male friend) I swear I'm still screwed up from that ish.
A contest entry
- Don't Tear Out My Heart, if you Can't Put It Back by DanielleFace.
500 points, ended January 8, 2007, 53 entries
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This is very deep. I really liked it. You are very talented.
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Ofcourse such a title is powerful and interesting as well. I love to see what great writers do to such popular phrases as Fuck You and such. Really strong piece with a forceful tone. Thanks. Anthony.
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wow. really really strong. i liked this one alot.
i can relate to alot of it.
Wiping away the tears
I never thought I'd cry
Wishing you were here
But hoping that you die
especially that part.
good luck! -
tell it how it is!
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WOOT~
High 5
I don't care for the foul talk but this poem hits right where it should in thoughts and emotions.
I can't even express enough of how this hits so many that have ever been done that way before.
Great write and keep penning!!!
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damn did you date Court too?
He told me he loved me and called me baby girl! OMG he was fucking gay? Shit!
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Ha ha ha... Beautiful!
You are full of surprises. I love it. And you are quite prolific!!! I can't keep up.
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