It makes her flesh start to crawl
Simply thinking of his touch
Remembering all the pain he caused
How it hurt so very much
She can still see him coming
Can still hear him speak her name
It took him three whole minutes
But she'll never be the same
She awakes most nights from nightmares
She can still feel him inside
She's too ashamed to tell her family
That part of her has died
She's filled with an anxiety
Everytime someone walks behind her
She runs instinctively from footsteps
Prays to God that he won't find her
She can't help but dwell on it
Her life since then stands still
She tells herself it didn't happen
Can't face tha fact it was for real
She and her friends they drift apart
They just can't seem to understand
Why she let's him destroy her life
Such a worthless excuse for a man
She lays in bed day after day
Replaying it over in her head
She tries so hard to carry on
She wishes he were dead
She remembers having so much hope
On her graduation day
But she just can't seem to cope
Now all she is, is raped
A contest entry
- Deep sorrow ,deep love, deep....? you tell me by Slowly searching.
600 points, ended January 16, 2007, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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where is the a$$hole...
i'll take him out, i hope to god this isn't true...
great write but i hate this kind of stuff... pisses me off really bad...
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wow very emotional, its not always easy to write about such a awful experience/subject. Wonderful job on the wrting, it made me feel for the girl in it.
agape- cynt
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wow..i do have to say great job. So deep, so true. Thats sad. You really captured wha it would feel like. It is such a shame to know that stuff like this really happens...and happend. One of my best freindswas almost raped this school year. She was terrified when she saw him down the hall I wanted to kill him for doing that... ok n e ways...great poem, terrible world though...this is differnet than what I have in my contest thank you so much for entering. Good luck and i will be rereading the poems before I judge them.
Alwaysalone -
wow talk about writing about a situation. This was deep and painful almost like it was really you who experienced this and I hope to God it isn't true! Much props!
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