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My Angel, in so many ways!

A touch away from everything:
In tenderness of dreams we meet.
Your milky skin, and lips- so soft,
And eyes that heart-ache can't defeat.
So evident- the mystery,
An innocense not stripped away;
Not touched, or marred, or seared, or scarred,
By time, nor pain, nor lifes dismay.
The hours now- all spent alone,
Yet reaching for that distant heart,
And moments shared by love-struck words,
Within our oath to never part.
I'm ruined now, for anyone,
And yet- at last- I do not care.
Each face, each smile, each gentle look;
In everything: you're always there.
Your ample breasts and perfect thighs,
The pungent smell of your sweet skin,
That morning look; your messy hair,
Your sultry lips, your neck- so thin.
So now you've seen: obsessed I am.
And not a minute detail missed-
Each mole and scar upon your flesh-
And, every inch- these lips have kissed.
To think that I- mere mortal man-,
could live my days amidst your grace!
My soul, my strength, my heart, my love,
My angel in so many ways.

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Dedicated to the only thing that matters- my Angel

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 13, 2007
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    Nice piece. Thanks for entering! Good luck in the contest. - cgirl0410


  • EternalFyre
    January 26, 2007

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    This was a lovely and very descriptive poem, I could defiantly see the person you were describing in this poem. Good luck i nthe contest!


    • John McQuillan Jr.
      January 28, 2007
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      Thanx very much Lady.
      The woman in this poem is so much more than words could ever describe for me, but I had to try.

  • xx-nonamenoface-xx
    December 26, 2006

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    CAPTIVATING

    Such lovely words, leaves one breathless and at a loss for words, except... lucky woman!!
    awesome poem!
    xx-noname

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