I stand before you
with adoring, hungry eyes,
but allowing only my hands
to speak in those fiery flashes
of flesh language.
Tying a scarf
over your eyes to heighten the mystery
I reach out and lovingly trace
your face with my fingers
before gently stroking
them across your lips.
Then I guide your hands to remove
my robe and expose the stiffness of my desires,
bending down to give you
a deep, long wet kiss on your lips
and then traveling to plant sweet, soft kisses to your neck,
ears and shoulders,
allowing your hands to signal
their approval as they explore my body.
Slowly, every so tenderly,
do I untie your corset,
which you eagerly and quickly remove,
before guiding my hands to make love to your breasts and nipples
till my lips come to savor and inflame
their vulnerable ache
with countless teases
from my tongue
while I listen
for the little explosions of anticipation to come
through moans.
At last,
I know my reward is near,
when your body grows tense,
begging for greater satisfaction.
You lay back to await
my next embrace
which my hands prepare while spreading your legs
till my lips find their way to travel
one kiss at a time along the insides of your thighs.
Keeping pace with your muffled gasps
I finally reach that precious moist flower
you so yearn to be watered with my juices.
But first my tongue must dance its dance of climax song
upon your joy button
until your hands clutch at my hair and squeeze it with their silent pleas.
I move closer, lying down on top of you,
pressing my organ against the opening of your drenched love channel,
looking into your sex ravished eyes
smiling while I kiss your lips and we both wait
for the more to cum...
Author notes
This is for the erotic open.
A contest entry
- A Gift From A Sex Goddess by Seductive Whisperer.
550 points, ended January 11, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Naughty, Naughty....... by Dorcha Runda.
400 points, ended January 20, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell Me How It Is! by Luna Darling.
505 points, ended April 2, 2007, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Personally sensual (or erotic) by The D O M.
1000 points, ended December 22, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautifully done, seductive, enticing and all round hot stuff!
Thanks for the entry
The D O M
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ah, this is good...Keeping pace with your muffled gasps
I finally reach that precious moist flower
you so yearn to be watered with my juices." naughty....
good luck
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I can see why you won a gold for this!!!! This is great
which my hands prepare while spreading your legs
till my lips find their way to travel
one kiss at a time along the insides of your thighs.
Keeping pace with your muffled gasps
I finally reach that precious moist flower
you so yearn to be watered with my juices.
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this is exactly what i love to read!!! amazing!! see you that kinda of thoughts inside u! you should let them out more often!
MINDIE
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Thank you. I'm glad this was pleased.
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Wonderful and descriptive! I really liked it.
I have to admit my favorite line was:
'do I untie your corset,'
I have a thing for corsets so, to me that was a lovely touch. I wish you the best of luck!
Good luck in my contest -
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I'm glad you enjoyed my tale of opening what I would see as a gift. And I so enjoy opening them. Thanks for the great comment.
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Wow! How ultra sexy and passionate this is! Wow!
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Glad you enjoy my little effort on this one. Wrote it before being involved with Desire. Thank so much for the comment.
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Wow I loved that last line, but from it I got a really wicked visual, one of a mooring for a sea vessle. (Just to play pun on words.) (You know a sea vessle carries sea-men ok bad joke) any ways this piece just was so very slowseductive, it kind of reminded me of the seduction. Very wickedly classy.
Much enjoyed all the visuals and even the plays on words.
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Glad you enjoyed this write. Not my normal genre. But I guess I did okay. Thanks for the great comment.
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A naughty write indeed for a Sex Goddess contest. This is gold worthy and well worth the read in more than one way.
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Honestly, I think I would have preferred to have written this as an experience. But I will take the gold just the same.
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Damn
Well this i have to say was hot, I really liked the part of you tying a scarf around her eyes. Was this set in the 1800's? You say corset, so i was jw. I loved the poem, to tell you the truth i've never read an erotic poem from a male point of view. It was sweet and hot, agian, i loved it. Thanks so much for entering. Good Luck -
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In the other contest, the person started a story you were to finish and was wearing a corset. I'm do glad you like my offering.
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OH !!
Now I didn't think I ever thought you might be writting these but this was mmmmmmmmmmmmmm very nice
Well Done
Love Jackie
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Hi Jackie.
Well you know how it is when you have way too much free time and a free hand and then, er, nevermind that part. Thanks so much for the great comment.
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Hot
I have not read your poetry in a while and I know now, I need to pay more attention. My oh MY, this was very , almost too, interesting to read. I admire your ability to express yourself so freely within this writing. I am impressed.
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Hi Scarlet. You certainly picked a most unsual time to check out my writing. See what happens while you are gone? Thanks so much for reading it with its, um, different style for me.
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WOW!
Is all I can manage to say right now this piece it's so erotic and sensual you just intoxicate me with every word and line it's just so beautiful. Words can't even describe how this piece made me feel. Great Write and Good luck in the Contest!
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Thanks Trixie. I figured I couldn't be a decent slave unless I did some worthwhile practicing first. Glad it looks like the practice is helping.
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