Long silver hair covers your shimmering eyes
Wisps of wind surround your porcelain body
You know that I am here; yet unseen to you
Golden eyes erupt in the consuming darkness
Soft shivers travel down your spine
As I draw my red nails over your pale skin
My Delacroix, my love and my pleasure
Open up the windows to let the warm breeze in
Silhouette barely seen through the moonlight
Sitting up in bed; holding out your hand
Silk sheets flowing from your perfect form
As you stand to grab my invisible body
Pull the curtains in front of the windows; I’m lost
No shadows cover your walls; your sight has gone
Lay back down in bed believing that I have left
Throw off the sheets with a shocked look on your face
Finding you clad in absolutely nothing but skin
Feverish grin appears as I contemplate my methods
Wrap my hands around your throat as I look at you
Sleep has come for your soul so I shall wait
Tick tock the clock slowly goes by
With the faintest light of dawn your golden eyes open
Try to get up but I push you back down in your place
Wet tongue nibbling and licking your ears
Soft moans escape from your craving lips
Run my fingers through your untangled hair
Arch my back as convulsions shake through me
I never thought that I would want you this badly
Oh no, I am not close to being done with you
Glaze covers your eyes as the lust takes control
Your arms stretch forth to find my body over yours
Gasp as your black nails trace down my back
Force your hands down; no longer can you touch
Slide my tongue from your throat to your chest
Shall I tease you even more my love?
A quick lick to the right nipple to test your pleasure
Gently blow cold air and watch as it hardens
Flick my nails over the left nipple and you gasp aloud
Small laughs echo from the walls of your bedroom
I can feel my wetness course down my legs
So little time I have gotten to play with you my dear
Yet here I am trying my hardest to stop the climax
Rub my leathery tongue over your left breast
As it’s time to tease the other with my fingers
Now I have an extra hand to do my dirty work
Rake my nails down your abdomen and stomach
Throbbing member pulses in my tightened grip
Lift my head up to stare into your beautiful eyes
Unseen lips attack your own mouth with fervor
Brush apart and drive my tongue to dance with yours
Never ending moans boil from your throat
Raise my body up as my hand leaves your member
Your golden eyes burst open with fire as you feel
My wetness consume your tender member
Hot liquid streams down to your thighs as I move
Up and down in fluid motion neverending
Lean back down to capture your mouth once more
Your hands travel through thin air to catch me
Kneeding and twisting my already hard nipples
Roll me over to extend your tongue over my breasts
Sunlight begins to break through the curtains
Take my body from your swollen pink flesh
Flick the head with my cold tongue for a reaction
Stillness consumes you as I nibble and lick
Wrap the wetness around you going up and down
Faster and faster until you grab my hair; lucky catch
Pull me back up to have your mouth cover mine
Push my body back over you so quick and silent
Moans escape quicker than before; are you on the verge?
Sway my waist back and forth; as you start to pant
Sweat glistens on your gentle pale skin; so beautiful
Your eyes remain open to see your cum enter me
Spreading though a hidden figure still around you
Muscles contract and I dance with your tongue again
Scream muffled from the raw pleasure running down
Remove my body from your figure to lie beside you
Grasp your hand in mine for the rest of the day
As sleep comes to take us both away
Author notes
Lord Victor Delacroix from Chaos Legion. One of the sexiest bastards on this planet (video game wise). This was very inspiring. My erotica skills have returned. Now Dante or Virgil from DMC3... hehe
A contest entry
- You're invisible for a day ... get your freak on baby !!! by Manda Kathryn.
750 points, ended January 8, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
OMG.. one of the kinkiest writes I have ever written!
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Wow very nicely written, you mske imgages pop into ones mind as you read this, great work. And you amde it flow together so perfectly, Good work.
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That was a nice write. As I read it, things kept popping into my mind. The way it flows so naturally kept me reading until the end. I like video games and it is a nice idea using them as subjects for poetry.
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GREAT READ
VERY NICE! YOU HAVE DONE AN OUTSTANDING JOB ON THIS ONE. I TRULY ENJOYED READING AND COMMENTING.
KEEP ON PENNING!
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your last poem, the greatest one ever
dearie... i will miss you forever... im so sad that you're gone... your death will be a reminder... i love you so much!!
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cute....^^
beautiful descriptions..and quite a sexi story..just breathtaking all the visuals you give to your readers...and wow wish my grammer and vocab was as surpreme as yours...
so did enjoy truelly
tess
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Normally I don't like erotics done by under 18 year olds, I should have written that in the contest, but never the less ...
This is a very interesting erotic to me; interesting in the way you have used a games character.
This is very well written, long but intruiging enough to keep a reader reading ...
I felt you stayed a little too long on the nipples and chest part, but if that is how you like to write it, that's completely fine
It is very well written, and very sexy ...
I am glad this contest inspired you to write more erotics
Thank you for your entry and Good luck
Stay safe
~Amanda
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I really liked this piece. The only thing that almost stopped me from reading it was the fact that it was one whole block, and you didnt seperate it at all. I think some of the lines would've had much more effect if they were seperated. [Unlike others though, I'm not asking you to change it, merely giving my opinion] I believe that my favorite line in this piece was this one: "Your golden eyes burst open with fire as you feel
My wetness consume your tender member"
Beautiful.
♥
Failed.
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Hmmm... I really need to start spliting up my poems. I have tried before... But usually they are uneven. I cannot stand stanzas with odd amount of lines. Anyways. 78 lines. I can have 13 stanzas with 6 lines each. You think that may be a wise idea?
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I think it would be a grat idea. :]
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Alright. Done. Does it still sound good? It seemed when I chopped it up into the 6 lines the lines inbetween threw off the flow of that exact moment. Could just be me though.
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OMG THAT IS SO WEIRD! I JUST BOUGHT CHAOS LEGION! LMFAO. I had orginally rented it and I never got to finish it so I bought it for x-mas. Freaky.
Anyways....
WOW. This is really really sexy. Usually I don't like erotica because most erotica writers can't write for shit but this is sexy and well-written. Awesome. Gonna need a shower I think...
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hmmmmmmmmmmm, this is good, i i think you never lost them you are a great poet, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Awesome!
so descriptive, this was my guilty pleasure of the day:}}
~WU
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