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Lost Love / diamond style

Pain
Love lost
Splash the water
The Ripples fade away
Sluggish to forget
Content again
Bliss

Author notes

Diamond style is a type of shape poetry that is not written in the shape of the subject just in the shape of a diamond.

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    August 20, 2008
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    nice!


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 28, 2007

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    Yoou have written a lovely diamond shaped poem here - such great thoughts expressed in these few lines. You are really doingn some great things with shapes in your writing.


  • night-eyed demon
    April 19, 2007

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    yeah you made a nice dimond shap. but the poem told a lot even though it was short. As I say short but sweet.
    nice poem

    marius


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 5, 2007

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    calm, matter of fact, cyclical poem. From pain through the ablutions to bliss. And well shaped too.
    Last one tonight.
    Buddy


  • Manoura xx
    January 24, 2007
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    nice...subject...and shape...and poem...haha...NICE EVERYTHING>>>BYE!!!!!!!!11

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