crying, crying crying,
its all i ever do,
since the first day
that i stumbled on to you,
My heart felt full,
engorged with love and glee,
but like all good things,
you up and left me.
i let my heart feel
and I fell into deep
i gave you my heart with a few words,
I said, "here its yours to keep"
you crushed it,
it burst
Its gone
it hurts
trust is something,
i seldom give,
I thought I could to you,
and that was short lived.
so tell me why,
I should continue with you,
when all you've ever done,
is break the heart, that you made grew.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a good write. i can feel the pain in it. the part i liked was:
"you crushed it,
it burst
Its gone
it hurts"
i liked the way it ryhmed there.
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Wow, this happened to me!! Good write, it sucks so much to get your heart broken by the one who mended it. Welcome 2 allpoetry and good write.
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It’s so sad to me to see love fade away, especially when there is unanswered questions. I wish you all the best in life. Awesome poem, very heartfelt and relatable*
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