Silver...MEADOWS and RAIN

Passion is suddenly elusive
My desire is going insane
Where is my soul mate taking me
Through these meadows in the rain

My being moves in slow motion

Pondering which way to go

Nature fulfills the presence

Displaying a reflective rainbow

An interesting pattern of color

I watch while waiting in vain

I stagger and cry while wandering

Through these meadows in the rain

Am I chasing down delusions

Of a dream that's not to be

A blurred perception emerges

Of a love that wants to flee

These nectar thoughts of passion

Reels of both aches and pain

Wandering within periods of darkness

Through these meadows in the rain

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Is it really better to have loved and lost? by A Soul Torn Asunder. 380 points, ended January 3, 2007, 25 entries
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slipperssun
December 28, 2006
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i just lovew the way you started with this:

Passion is suddenly elusive
My desire is going insane

and the big question in here

Am I chasing down delusions

Of a dream that's not to be

A blurred perception emerges

Of a love that wants to flee
fantastic
- A floatingleaf
  January 11, 2007
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  Thanks Slipperssun, sometimes we are shockingly surprised...sunny
A floatingleaf
December 26, 2006

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Scorp...
Thank you so much for your comment...your opinion means the world to me...I realize I need to go higher with my imagination...