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Through Music

I remember all of those little moments
Each time everything went wrong
It brings back lots of memories
Everytime I hear that certain song

Smoke on the water
And fire in the sky
Remember when we listened to Hendrix
And just let time pass us by

I remember getting sentimental
Thinking of every time I ever cried
As I listened to him sing about
The day the music died

Stealing all of mom's old records
Letting the rock n roll be reborn
My soul was touched when Dylan sang
Of how he felt hopeless and forlorn

Janis always seemed to speak to me
And made me proud to be a girl
I've always had respect for Aretha
And Zepplin rocked my world

I remember exactly where I was in life
By every song I hear them play
I can remember the first time I ever heard it
And still love those songs today

All the lyrics that meant something to me
Are burned forever into my mind
Each time I hear the melodies
It takes me back in time

Each note is part of what I've become
And I know I'll never lose it
Because no matter how you feel in life
You can relate to and escape through music

Author notes

Music is awesome, the poem makes more sense if you like old school rock and not like the new age rap lol oh yeah and ps the doors rock!!!!

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  • GuitarDude
    December 27, 2006
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    Excellent!

    Nice! I love the references to different songs and artists! I can relate-my mom's always looking for her CD's, and I always have them. The last stanza is AMAZING because it's SO true! I love this poem! Great work and good luck in the contest!


  • princess-bubblegum
    December 26, 2006

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    FANTASTIC!

    I really liked this, as a music lover, i felt you have repected and applauded the roots of music! well done!


  • Kari gold member
    December 26, 2006

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    The flow of this is incredible. You have done very well. I think that you'll do great in this contest hun..crosses fingers!

    Kari


  • blueyez
    December 26, 2006

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    Janis was my mom's fav!!!!!!!!!!! I use to hate all that shit because it was my mom's shit. Now I love it for the very same reason!
    This is an awesome write!


  • Ninjaww
    December 26, 2006
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    impressive

    got goose bumps on that "when the music died" line. that was awesome yo.. absolutely epic song

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