I saw a Butterfly roaming around,
And asked her, "Dear Butterfly, what are you looking for?".
She then replied, "I am looking for a little girl named Kiarna."
I guided her to little Kiarna's little home.
She presented a GIFT to Kiarna from Santa's house.
It was Beautiful to see those LOVELY....
Butterflies!
They were Pink and followed her everywhere!
They played with her in her Princess land,
They slept with her on her big soft Pink bed!
They comforted her when she was sad,
They shared their happiness with her throughout!
Kiarna was so HAPPY to have them!
A contest entry
- Take A Pick by PoetryPuppy.
400 points, ended December 29, 2006, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a beautiful write, sweet little child of mine. A wonderful gift of love to a sweet little girl. You are so sweet, just as your write.
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awwwww me lil berry wot a butiful poem u did for kiarna glad u won silver..smiles Aunty cheeky
xxxxxx
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Congrats!!
Hey sis.. congrats on gettin a Silver.. seriously this poem is just worth it!!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS once again!
Lots of Love,
*Nida*
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thank you for your lovely poem, Kiarna
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Butterfly kisses!
To sleep with the butterflies, and feel the soft warmth of the wings within your heart, beating slowly in the arms of your care little lady.
A beautiful poem from a beautiful heart.
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Happy Time
What a sweet and colorful, fun filled poem you have given to your friend. To play and sleep in the wings of joyous pink butterflies sounds such a delight.
Very nicely done,
Love Dad
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Oh sweetie this is such a precious write for Kiarna
What a wonderful thing to send to her, lovely pink butterflies.
I know she will lovew this write as I d
Love ns
Granmaxoxoxox
Gaylenes
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WHAT i lovely write. How beautiful and sweet. How could not be happy with beautiful butterflies around them all the time.
Well done! What a beautiful write from such a special little girl!
Love,
mom
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Thank-You sister for the advice!
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Brill..
Oh Sis.. this is just a Wonderful write and I know that Kiarna will LOVEEEE it to the core of her Heart! I felt that it has emotion in it.. dunno what type but! 
I too would feel really very HAPPY if Santa presented me also Pink Butterflies! The title is just perfect for this short poem. The first line too is gr8 and the last line is really seeming HAPPY! You could add something more to this poem like how the Butterflies slept, played, etc. with Kiarna and stuff. Otherwise this poem is just Excellent!! GOD bless you and Best of Luck in the contest!
Lots of Love,
*Nida*
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