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First Time?

Let the night spit the venom
Softly burning the skin
Of the innocent wandering soul
Looking around for the first lustful passion

The prowling vampire seeks the company
The red eyes caught her sight
Smilingly quickly approaches the untainted spirit
Lurking for her first night out

Shockingly she stands
Starring at the shadows of the dark
Forming a vicious circle around
With frozen melting bleeding icicles
Of burning desires to take naked dips
Into the vast open oceanic skies
Of none other than alluring battlefield of unforgiving love

Cautiously she reaches for the hidden shadow
The vampire jumps out of her skin
Tauntingly flirting with his fiery eyes
Teasingly smiling before her

She in response calms the waters
Back starring into his burning eyes
Touches his face wiping off the sparkling sweat
Sending chills through the spine
From fainting head to quivering feet

She quietly laughs at him
What happened she asked
I thought it was my first night out
But it’s your first time it seems
To be taken out and down by an untainted spirit

Let the crimson flames sizzle
I’ve opened the doors for you to walk in
Blood thirsty vampire cautiously enters the dome
Where she stands ready to pounce at him

Teasing, flirting to allure him to the game of passion
As she undresses slowly
First she drops the coat
Takes a step forward
Then goes for unbuttoning the angelic blouse
Colored with purity of white

A step forward and the tainted vampire stand still
As she let go her bottoms he drops dead on the floor
Almost dead, merely breathing heavy
She then drops before him on her knees

She reaches for him tenderly
Scratching off his attire completely
Right before her virgin eyes
As he lays frozen on the thorns laid for him

For the finalization of the game
She unhooks her bare essentials
And lets her bare skin soar to the occasion
While frozen vampire lies with his mouth open

The practice before the show
Begins with a wet kiss on moistened lips
That takes its path all the way to the bottom of bare skins
The moaning began for the very first scene
When naked layers of skins entangle in between
Yes! This is exactly what is and should be for the first time
I pledge my virgin soul to my frozen demon
That has devoured me into the game of nightly passion
To stamp on every inch on my naked soul enveloped inside bare skin
The pleasure of the very first time
Between the nightly demon and the untainted soul

As she takes his hand to measure her soaring height
To match her curved width
She pushes his self into her more
To draw every breath of nightly pleasure

Back and forth, playfully handling his jewels
As he bites into her neck
Daringly while climbing her mountains
From there jumping into her depths
Indulging the alive moments of passion
To satisfy her aspirations
She so wanted to gain during her first time

Time after time, again and again
They moan with pleasure
She smiled over and over
Capturing the whole deadly vampire
Into the cage of her game of pain of love

With her as a weapon
For the finale
She stood pushing him apart
Walking away teasingly from him
Got dressed & threw his clothes on his face
Get dressed there is another surprise waiting for you

Little the demon knew of her
He got dressed and followed her on the roof
It was at the highest cliff
Kiss me wet, let me have your taste one more time
As a toast to our first time
Closed eyes they finish a circle of love
She smiled and asked ready for your surprise?
Yes was the only word he said
Off he was pushed
In the valley for the first time

She had finally done it for the first time
She accepted the challenge and alas did win
The king of demons came down
And said, well done my queen
You are now the sole official ruler of all demons

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  • January 3, 2007

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    Very clever

    She smiled and asked ready for your surprise?
    Yes was the only word he said
    Off he was pushed
    In the valley for the first time

    She had finally done it for the first time
    She accepted the challenge and alas did win
    The king of demons came down
    And said, well done my queen
    You are now the sole official ruler of all demons

    Liked the analogy of goodness and purity conquering evil and darkness in the grand scheme of things.


    Very well written.

    Art


  • ShatteredSilverStar
    December 27, 2006
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    wow, it is not what i expected to read but this is really good and yeah it was a bit long but it is well written and i can tell you took the time to think this out before posting..it sounds like it should be a novel or part of a movie like those christopher pike series of books or something..


  • Cannonsfire
    December 27, 2006

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    Don't ever explain the length in your title, it is your right as a poet to write what you feel no matter how short or long it is, tis of no consequence to the reader for if he truly wants to explore the piece then he will read to it's conclusion.
    Now to the piece once I jump off the soapbox! This has a magical, mystical quality full of metaphors, not sure if it's her first time but as a beckoning demon it most surely would be, tempting the fully turned vampire into her lair. I liked it however you wished it to be. It's dark and hauntingly beautiful.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 26, 2006

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    you did wonderfully on this, i think you should do more on this, you are good, i have notice a lot of pain in your writing so i know that you will be able to use this keep it flowing


    • imperfectperfection
      December 26, 2006
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      Thanks DP

      Thanks my friend for stopping by and reading my weird poem I've no idea where did this come from, but last night I got up at night and just typed it all what can I say, I'm weird & crazy & that's what makes me me I'm glad you enjoyed this piece & I'll try keep it flowing. Thanks again

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