What is Love, when no one out there Loves you the way you could Love them?
What is love, when no one sees you for who you are, not just parts of you?
What is LOVE? What is Love? What is love?
What is love, when your best friends fight and the weight of the fight in their relationship rest on your shoulders?
What is LOVE, when it feels like God is always against you?
What is LOVE? What is Love? What is love?
What is LOve, when God isn't showing you the one person that can help you in the physical?
What is Love, when the one person you think is right for you is just out of reach and everything is holding you back from getting them?
What is LOVE? What is Love? What is love?
LOVE, Love, and love are what you make them.
Love is something everyone hopes for and few never receive.
LOVE is what everyone receives but few notice it.
love is something most everyone receives and few decline it.
A contest entry
- Make me float on Poetic Heavens by SilverMoonFeathers.
472 points, ended March 7, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your best! by Carly Pop.
800 points, ended March 7, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Future Poet by tara wilson.
500 points, ended March 14, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything. by Escape--.
525 points, ended March 13, 2007, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling all Poets for Poetry by Dark Whispers.
375 points, ended March 26, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How Are You Feeling? ((PRE-WRITES ALLOWED!)) by A Murderous Lament.
390 points, ended April 28, 2007, 167 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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If you modified it it could become a nice. the repition of "love dulled the poem very much.thank you for your entry.
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I find 'what is love' a bit repetitious, although I know what you mean by this, I ask myself this question all the time and never find an answer.
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this is a really great poem, and i have really enjoyed reading it, the poem flows and the use of repeating the words what is love was brilliant idea. the flow is brilliant especially because you have no rhyme to it. the title is very effective to the poem and the poem itself wasnt what i expected it to be like.
However, i dont feel the emotion in this poem, this poem is just asking a question about what love is and not how you feel, i feel nothing from the poem, and it to me feels like you didnt read the rules of my contest as you havent added the option. Therefore it is with great regret that i am going to have to remove you from my contest as i dont see how this poem relates to my rules and what i said i was looking for. sorry. BUT WELL DONE FOR SUCH A FANTASTIC WRITE
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Thank you for your entry. I will have results no later than tomorrow
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this is good not something i expected but i love it
Good luck in my contest
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Welcome to AP
Love is a GIFT from God; a most awesome gift that God gave to us to share, experience, feel, and cherish
Your thoughts are very well planned out
Thank you for sharing and welcome to the site
My only suggestions would be is to have a different background or different font; it's a bit hard to read.
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