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Christmas

happy happy happy day
my love stayed home from work today
we walked the dog
and cooked a ham
and now I know how loved I am

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  • terdos
    January 6, 2007

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    Nice

    This one made me smile . It is a great write. It flows nicely with a good rhyme. Fairly simple structure, but it works and got your point across.

    Keep writing,

    Terdos


    • HsiaoKuo
      January 9, 2007
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      A smile is hard to capture, so I'm glad it worked. Thank you so much for leaving a comment!