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Cheers

He would drink
He would beat her
My mother, she would smile
She had nothing else to do
But smile
And I would rage inside
And shake
And dream of fighting him

Inadequacy stays with you
Even now I get scared
And know that if back then
I’d punched him
I’d be a better man for it

I remember her smile
She smiled
He drank
She bled
I raged

Silently

And I would ask her
Each night
‘Why do you buy him drink?’

And she’d smile
And say;


‘It’s better to keep him happy’

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  • quantumsurveyor
    July 22, 2007

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    Ouch!!!

    This is powerful even before the final line. I felt this piece like a foul blow beneath the belt. Thanks so much fpr sharing this.
    Donald