B are body lying
R esting painfully
O n the ground
K issing the naked cold chills
E ngulfing the shattered soul
N ailing it down firmly against my will
H elp I silently shout
E xercising my right to freedom
A s agony strikes
R agingly devouring me
T o eternal misery
O ver and over again
N estles the longing thoughts in my mind
B oldly the sinful pain as
E xcruciatingly moaning self
D elivers the cries
O n the deafened ears
F irmly shut with bleeding wounds
R aping my inner soul
O pening the core of my heart
S licing it gently but keeping it alive, for an
E ndless journey of painful love to take alone while leaving behind
S ound sleep, my broken heart on bed of roses to cry out loud but no one to listen
Author notes
Broken Heart on Bed of Roses (Acrostic)
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A contest entry
- Merry Christmas by individuality.
600 points, ended December 24, 2006, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Broken and a blood addict by locked door.
450 points, ended December 27, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The name is what drew me in. I love this! I think you did a fantastic job on this one my friend! I have a hard time with Acrostic stlye pieces, but you make it look sooo easy! Best of luck in the contest. Keep that pen flowing.
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very creative! I'm impressed. Really it was an enjoyment to experience.
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interesting choice of style for this poem I really enjoyed it thanks alot for your entry
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i can't say anything about this i mean this is good you did a great job on this keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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a good acrostic piece. thank you kindly for entering. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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nice well written acrostic most people one place one word for each letter you did a whole sentecne that makes it awesome well done-william
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