Pulling you up against the wall while bringing your soft sensual mouth down to mine thrusting my tongue deep into your mouth while my hands explore your body unbuttoning your shirt tossing it onto the floor your lacy bra soon follows bending over to your breasts kiss, and sucking upon both nipples filling them harden in my mouth leaving a trail of wetness while each one. My mouth moving upward kissing your silken neck leaving a trail of wet kisses upon your skin. Your hands curling into my hair bring me closer. My hands go across your stomach my mouth flows leaving a trail and graze the edge your jeans on my knees I pull the zipper down peeling your jeans off along with your panties. Oh your so beautiful having a neat bush between your thighs. I pull you on to the floor the coolness of the floor arousing your body as well as my intentions. I pulling your silken thighs apart taking the time to lick around your wet mouth around your lips and then gently teasing your bud I slowly start licking and probing into you. Your hips bucking against me moving faster and faster. Your sharp moans is intoxicating music which I like to hear. Rubbing against my face I feel your wetness trickling down. Grabbing a fist full of my hair pulling me in closer I move faster and faster into you. One last gasp from your mouth and your climax rains over my face. I get up and lick the remaining contents. I grab you by your hair so you can taste your passion upon your lips. Your hands rubbing over my body lightly pinching my nipples making me moan against your mouth I only want to pleasure you. Taking the biggest didlo I have I give what you deserve pushing your face against the wall. I roughly enter into you from behind pumping faster and faster till you scream loving the way your breasts juggle from the fraction your growing sharper and sharper as I'm going deeper and faster into you. Pulling your silky hair and clawing at your neck and back leaving marks on your skin I moan from the satisfaction of making you cum. Grabbing your ass while thrusting even harder I see your wetness leaving a milky coating on the plastic. I push you down on to floor and you get on top of me. Up and down bouncing happily on to the didilo I take of your breasts rubbing the harden beads your moaning turning into screams pleading with me to stop and you can't take much more. I won't have it this pleasure is for you and only you. Reaching down I massage your clit rubbing and rotating the silken bud with my fingertips your peace increases and your pants and gasps are more sharper and finally you scream from climax. Climbing off on me you kiss me tenderly and rub my clit I moan against your mouth my folds are so wet from what I've done to you I buck my hips faster and faster to meet each of your thrusts. when it's over we both lay upon the floor soaked in sweat with our love making.
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not bad so hot
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Not Bad
This piece is not bad but you have some typos in there and also you have used the wrong words in some places. A very graphic story though. Well done. Thank you for your entry and good luck.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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Oh no. lol it's not right for my contest. Not at all. A few suggestions, and I won't get into it all. This isn't poetry. It's sex. Almost a "how to manual" The trick to writing good erotica is telling just enough so the reader gets the picture without getting the graphic details. The best writer of erotica on this site is manicmuze. And she does it without detail and never uses a dirty word.
Desiree
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mouth watering fun!
Great write. very sexual, most of the poems or short stories i read are by women... they just write so much better!
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very hot!
a very hot erotic write that leaves the reader feelin ghot and bothered ha ha ha great work ,very vivid picture forming erotica naughty girl!
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Oooo....you toed the line a few times but to be honest thats what I want people to do regaurding my rules, lol. It's a very fantastic write, very well written and very descriptive. Nice stuff, Good luck!!
.:Shady Lane:.
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yowzaaaa
you have an evident knack for writing erotica
fucking amazing
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A very erotic story line here. I could once again find myself imagining every move the two made. You again find a way to incorporate the sweet gentleness with the rough "do what I say" sex. I simply love the whole idea. I do have one question though, exactly how big is that biggest dildo you have? Just for thought? HAHA.
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Your entry was enjoyed. IT's different in format and layout - reminds me of Walt Whitman's style except he used aboslutely no punctuation until the last period. I do love givers...
It is right for my contest. Thank you for entering.
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There are few times in my life that I wish I was a woman, but you manage to create one... ha ha ha. You are such a treat. Thank you for sharing your bad self.
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A tale of explosions!
Ah, this was incredible hot and deliciously graphic. You build the intensity to a perfect moment. And the aftermath that is truly what to leave the reader feeling nearly drained from the action. This was a great tale. Good luck in the contest.
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