daddy stop yelling at mommy it ain't her fault
I spilt the milk and knocked over the salt
please don't hit me I didn't mean to
Oh my god whats gotten into you...
your not like this usuallylike this
usually you want to hug me
is it my fault you started to get mad
is it my fault you always think I am bad
I love you daddy very much
Even when it hurts from your violent touch.
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wow, this is such a deep emotional write. I love how you wrote it from the child's point of view, adds so much more pain and heartbreak to it.
All the best
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great job
you can feel how the child feels and i think that is a good thing....i was never abused in THAT way....but this poem is really good....so keep up the good work.... -
I can understand and relate to this in one form, my Dad never dared lay a hand on my Mother but didn't seem to mind hitting me.
Strong write.
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Im sorry that you were put through the pain of ever having to deal with what he did. I pray that you get through this and I hope that you are a better person in spite of what your father did.
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V3ry pow3rful.............emot!on@l @nd v3ry s@d.....!m sorry you h@d to go through som3th!ng l!k3 th@t...
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This is a nice write.. It is very full of love but yet to the point agaian
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i am amazed at the writes i am reading tonight. thank you so much for this entry. viyanna rosemarie
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this was such a sad write and full of pain and emotino...no one should ever have to go through this and im sorry for your experiences...your a very talented author keep writting
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This is such a sad poem.. but sometimes we still love the ones that hurt us.. even if they are awful people..
Thanks for entering my contest.
Tammy
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wow
omg this was really good. "I love you daddy very much
Even when it hurts from your violent touch. " this line has so much meaning because thats how it really is.
YL
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wow, this is so sad but beautifully written. I'm sorry that this has happened to you, but you wrote it out very well, keep it up and hold your head high
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this is a good poem!
this poem is very touching i understand how this boy/girl feel and if this is haoppening to you i will pray. -
Wow!
This is an intense piece. Did you say you were 15. Wow. If you just started writing I can't wait to see what happens in a couple of years. Great piece of poetry and the content, I'm sorry. I know what it's like.
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