I hold my athame close to my heart
Bound to me you never can part
Casting a spell to keep you my love
Sure as the flight of the morning dove
Before the altar I stand undressed
With power of sorcery I am blessed
This sacred rite is hallowed for me
It lends repose and sets one free
I bind you with my sorcerous deed
Using my athame and willow reed
I know my spell does work two ways
For now you own me for all my days
The power has been from days of ole
So now to you I have pledged my soul
I give you my all, I give you my life
From now till forever, I’ll be your wife
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A contest entry
- ~~Show me true love~~ by RudolfTamer.
420 points, ended January 8, 2007, 60 entries
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Spell binding for sure..it makes you wonder if this was a mutual arrangement Or who is truly getting what they want, though it could easily be a union and sacrifice in the name of true love...
Regardless, wonderful rhyme and rhythm, I really like the way it flows, my favorite kind to read!
♥
Michele
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Again you show yyour rhythmn and mastery of rhyme. very well done indeed. So you cast a spell. That's how you do it!
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Sounds good to me.
Let's set a date. Three bridesmaid bunnies.
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oh...and haha...i am the first one to sign!!!YAAAY ME!!!haha
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wait...a quatrain is lyk 4 lynes or something that have a pattern of aabb right??? oh and there are four parts right????? well if it is...WELL THEN GREAT...if it isn't...WELL THEN GREAT>..AGAIN>..hahahaha....BYE~~~~!!!!
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